Tableau
11.25.09
I will never forget how she looked when I saw her, on that morning as I was jogging in the woods: the dappled light dancing on her face, dark hair caressing her shoulders in the gentle breeze, full lips slightly parted, eyes bulging and feet still twitching a little as she hung from the tree.
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Tags: 55 words, Flash Fiction, Writing
Ha Ha! I love it! And they call me bad…
So… he's in to dead chicks?
@ Laura – well, you know what they say, when we're good we're very good, but when we're bad, we're better 🙂
@ Jared – if he wasn't before, I reckon he is now…
You can't really blame him if he is into dead chicks now, you make her sound quite beautiful
Somehow I knew Laura would love this. 🙂
Great imagery here Mazzz!
Miss Otis regrets she's unable to lunch today.
Bonus points to Noland for the musical reference. Strange fruit, indeed.
twitch!
Good and creepy!
Very nice description.
I wouldn’t blame him if he is into dead chicks after that – after reading this I think I am now!